MBA聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)備考攻略：寫作技巧篇

2015-02-06 14:55 | 太奇MBA網(wǎng)

　　寫作技巧：句型變換

　　MBA聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)中的寫作部分經(jīng)常是困擾MBA考生的一個(gè)障礙，且是他們?nèi)菀讈G分的一個(gè)項(xiàng)目。在MBA聯(lián)考英文考試中，作文的分?jǐn)?shù)為20分， 占總分的20%。太奇MBA小編從歷年英文考試的實(shí)際情況看，MBA考生的英語(yǔ)作文相對(duì)于英語(yǔ)考試的其他幾個(gè)部分，得分一直偏低。經(jīng)過(guò)觀察、分析和研究，我們認(rèn)為廣大考生在這一方面的困擾主要源于他們?cè)谟⑽膶懽鞯恼J(rèn)知上存在明顯的誤區(qū)以及由此帶來(lái)的心理障礙，這種認(rèn)識(shí)上的偏差和心理上的障礙嚴(yán)重地妨礙了他們寫作水平的提高。在不少人看來(lái)，寫作是一種深不可測(cè)的智力活動(dòng)，他們認(rèn)為寫作一定就是靈感的產(chǎn)物，或是將要說(shuō)的話變成書(shū)面的東西?；谶@種認(rèn)識(shí)，再加上對(duì)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言無(wú)把握，考生在時(shí)間和心理壓力很大的情況下進(jìn)行英文寫作時(shí)，經(jīng)常會(huì)顯得手足無(wú)措。

　　評(píng)判作文的二個(gè)初級(jí)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　1.詞匯：用詞面的寬

　　2.結(jié)構(gòu)：復(fù)雜句的量

　　3.道地：how much Chinglish

　　【Sample 1】

　　a. Reading makes us happy.

　　b. Reading is a major source of human happiness.

　　c. There is no doubt that reading is a major source of human happiness.

　　【Sample 2】

　　a. The Internet is very important in our lives and work.

　　b. The Internet is playing an increasingly important role in practically every aspect of our lives and work.

　　c. It is obvious that the Internet is playing an increasingly important role in practically every aspect of our lives and work.

　　Improved:

　　1. Many rivers are so seriously polluted that there is no fish nor clean water can be found.

　　2. Teachers play such an important role in education that their social status should be improved.

　　3. She spent much less time studying than before, which is quite typical of senior students.

　　4. In many IT companies where people work mainly with their brains, more attention must be given to sports

　　5. One essential difference between those who succeed and those who fail is the extent to which they take advantage of opportunities rather than the number of opportunities.

　　6. Teenagers, pressured by school] work and encouraged by their peers, often resort to smoking like adults, though they feel a little guilty at times.

　　7. Nuclear plants are a clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of much-needed energy, though people, especially local residents, who are very concerned about safety, hold a strong negative attitude toward them.

　　8. Despite soaring tuition fees and room-and-board charges, getting their children into college continues to be the goal of millions of Chinese people who think higher education will bring them a good job.

　　9. The US fast-food business, one of the most advanced in the world, has brought China benefits that go beyond providing consumers with more choice.

　　10-a. The pressure of land is forcing more homes to be built on the land once covered with trees and farmland.

　　10-b. Natural vegetation and even farmland is removed to make room for more houses due to the scarcity of land.

　　Directions: Learn to develop.

　　Living in city center is becoming is becoming not attractive. The first reason is that the house price keeps increasing, so more and more people can’t buy apartment house in the city center and have to move to the suburbs. The second reason is that the city is full of traffic, it is noisy and dirty.

　　Improved:

　　It is obvious that living in the city center is becoming less attractive. For one thing, the soaring prices of housing in the city centers force more and more people to move to the suburbs, as they cannot afford to live in downtown. For another, the city centers – now full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, and torn by the roar of buses and lorries – are increasingly perceived as undesirable in the eyes of working people.